Avenue first draft: love the way the background is out of focus at the start and at 40 seconds when there’s blurry grass in the foreground! good quality footage makes a big difference! the ending is great, it really builds up into that finale. when the words appear, i think it might look better if they were in the same split box effect with the black border as 2:36 and 2:40 instead of just overlaid? I feel like when the words come up at an angle it looks a bit unprofessional and less bold than if it was in the same effect as the other clips or even if it was just all bold across the centre of the shot like “head” and “paint”. really fun to watch! really original!
Avenue:
Avenue:
Monday morning is noit a good name for the videoDo not like drmaa
Avenue: We got full top mark ticks from this student. Also the student said editing is amazing and is simple but makes the video. End shot needs improving.
Avenue: We got top mark ticks. Level four they stated. Also again they said end shot is needed to be changed and one or twos shots throughout.
Avenue: Top mark ticks, level 4, Amazing.
Avenue: They said monday morning isn't a good name for our video. They liked the walking shots. They didn't like the subway background as it looked grimey. Also close-ups looked excellent. The split screen they were torn on.
Avenue: The unfocused shot on the first scene needs to be corrected. Low angle shots were not in time. Walk through forest needed to be sped up. They also said they were a bit dull. Jk jumped a little higher after smoke bomb scene.
Avenue: Good video and holds enough interest throughout.
Avenue: just change ending.
Avenue: 1st alley shot is not good quality, level 4. 'Mad effects' and fluent theme.
Avenue: Out of focus first shot. The editing they liked. Don't like the subway shot. Don't understand walking through forest shot. They liked the colours of the playground and the theme red, green and blue. Don't like the drama studio shots. Don't like the ending shot. Could have birds eye view shot.
Avenue: Love every part. little out of sync in science room.
Avenue: Change colour of Ollys tie.
Avenue: Love the colour theme. The idea of the photo shot transition just needs reshooting.
Avenue: Don't like montage of shots together. i love all other shots especially powder paint.
Avenue: Don't get walking through forest. Camera shakes sometimes. 37/40
Avenue: Don't like parts with words.
Avenue: LOVE, LOVE, LOVE. the forest scene doesn't fit. The unfocused first shot looks out of place.
Avenue: Pretty flawless. Camera does shake on occasions and a couple shots loom a bit false/out of place.
Avenue: Like correlation with paint and lyrics. Transitions are cool. Favourite is 360 degree shot. Some shots unsteady, not sure about text over faces.
Avenue: This is so good. The colours are really vibrant and is enjoyable. The beginning shot goes out of focus and at times the camera shakes and moves too quickly.
Avenue: We got full top mark ticks from this student. Also the student said editing is amazing and is simple but makes the video. End shot needs improving.
Avenue: We got top mark ticks. Level four they stated. Also again they said end shot is needed to be changed and one or twos shots throughout.
Avenue: Top mark ticks, level 4, Amazing.
Avenue: They said monday morning isn't a good name for our video. They liked the walking shots. They didn't like the subway background as it looked grimey. Also close-ups looked excellent. The split screen they were torn on.
Avenue: The unfocused shot on the first scene needs to be corrected. Low angle shots were not in time. Walk through forest needed to be sped up. They also said they were a bit dull. Jk jumped a little higher after smoke bomb scene.
Avenue: Good video and holds enough interest throughout.
Avenue: just change ending.
Avenue: 1st alley shot is not good quality, level 4. 'Mad effects' and fluent theme.
Avenue: Out of focus first shot. The editing they liked. Don't like the subway shot. Don't understand walking through forest shot. They liked the colours of the playground and the theme red, green and blue. Don't like the drama studio shots. Don't like the ending shot. Could have birds eye view shot.
Avenue: Love every part. little out of sync in science room.
Avenue: Change colour of Ollys tie.
Avenue: Love the colour theme. The idea of the photo shot transition just needs reshooting.
Avenue: Don't like montage of shots together. i love all other shots especially powder paint.
Avenue: Don't get walking through forest. Camera shakes sometimes. 37/40
Avenue: Don't like parts with words.
Avenue: LOVE, LOVE, LOVE. the forest scene doesn't fit. The unfocused first shot looks out of place.
Avenue: Pretty flawless. Camera does shake on occasions and a couple shots loom a bit false/out of place.
Avenue: Like correlation with paint and lyrics. Transitions are cool. Favourite is 360 degree shot. Some shots unsteady, not sure about text over faces.
Avenue: This is so good. The colours are really vibrant and is enjoyable. The beginning shot goes out of focus and at times the camera shakes and moves too quickly.
No comments:
Post a Comment